Khamosh lab hai jhuki hai palke,
dilo me ulfat nayi nayi hai.
Abhi taklluf hai guftgu me,
abhi mohobat nayi nayi hai.
Abhi na aayegi nind tumko abhi na
hamko suku milega,
abhi to dhadke ka dil jyada abhi ye
chahat nayi nayi hai.
Bahar ka aaj pahla din hai chalo
chaman me tahlke aaye,
faza me khushbu nayi nayi hai gulo
pe rangat nayi nayi hai.
Jo khandani rahis hai wo mijaz
rakhte hai narm apna,
tumhara lahja bata raha hai
tumhari doulat nayi nayi hai.
Jara sa kudarat ne kya nawaza ke
aake baithe ho pahli saf me,
abhi se udne lage hawa me abhi to
shohrat nayi nayi hai.
Bamo ki barsat ho rahi purane
janbaz so rahe hai,
Gulam duniya ko kar raha hai wo
jiski takat nayi nayi hai....!
dilo me ulfat nayi nayi hai.
Abhi taklluf hai guftgu me,
abhi mohobat nayi nayi hai.
Abhi na aayegi nind tumko abhi na
hamko suku milega,
abhi to dhadke ka dil jyada abhi ye
chahat nayi nayi hai.
Bahar ka aaj pahla din hai chalo
chaman me tahlke aaye,
faza me khushbu nayi nayi hai gulo
pe rangat nayi nayi hai.
Jo khandani rahis hai wo mijaz
rakhte hai narm apna,
tumhara lahja bata raha hai
tumhari doulat nayi nayi hai.
Jara sa kudarat ne kya nawaza ke
aake baithe ho pahli saf me,
abhi se udne lage hawa me abhi to
shohrat nayi nayi hai.
Bamo ki barsat ho rahi purane
janbaz so rahe hai,
Gulam duniya ko kar raha hai wo
jiski takat nayi nayi hai....!
37 comments:
Urdu ki ma behan kr dete hain ap Indians waese! let me correct it in proper urdu pronunciation:
"Khamosh lab hain jhuki hain palke,
dilo me ulfat nayi nayi hai.
Abhi taklluf hai guftgu me,
abhi mohobat nayi nayi hai.
Abhi na aayegi neend tumko
abhi na hamko sakoon milega,
abhi to dharkay ka dil zyada
abhi ye chahat nayi nayi hai."
Aur aap Pakistani insaniyat ki maa bahen kar dete hai..
or Pakistani urdu ki asi tesi kr dete hain,
pehle apni urdu durust kre HAsnat Tariq Usaf
its in pure urdu...and only pakistani can undertand pure urdu;;;;;
Khamosh lab hain jhuki hain palkeen, dilon me ulfat nayi nayi hai.
Abhi takalluf hai guftgoo men, abhi mohobat nayi nayi hai.
Abhi na aayegi nend tumko abhi na hamko sukon milyga,
abhi to dhadky ka dil zeyada abhi ye chahat nayi nayi hai.
Bahar ka aaj pahla din hay , chalo chaman me tehL k aayen
faza me khushboo nayi nayi hai , gulon pe rangat nayi nayi hai.
Jo khandani raees hain wo mizaaj rakhty hai narm apna,
tumhara lehja bata raha hai , tumhari doulat nayi nayi hai.
zara sa Qudarat ne kya nawaza , aa k baithy ho pehli saff me,
abhi se urrny lagy hawa men , abhi to shohrat nayi nayi hai.
Bamo ki barsat ho rahi purane janbaz so rahy hain,
Ghulam duniya ko kar raha hai , wo jiski taQat nayi nayi hai....!
Shoban Zaki aur Hasnat Tariq Saheb jahan tak mujhe maloom hai ke Urdu Pakistan mei sabse acchi Karachi mei boli jati hai. aur shayad ye aapko maloom nahi ke Karachi mei Muhajir jyada rahte hai.. abb ye Muhajir Hindustan se hi aye hai, na ki America se !!
kahne ko to ye bhi kah sakte hai ke Pakistan ko Urdu dene wale bhi Hindustani hi hai, Kyunki Urdu Pakistan mei nahi Hindustan ke Lucknow mei janmi hai.. Urdu jab sirf Urdu mei likhi jaye tab hi sahi likhi jati hai, warna sabka tarika alag alag hota jab Urdu ko Roman-English mei likhte hai..
May I know the bahar of this gazal
May I know the bahar of this gazal
what do you mean manisha joshi?
Manisha its a season of floweer
Finally, kisi ne achi urdu likhi.
Its shabeena adeeb's ghazal. And bahar is a season, means "spring"
Yeah baat indians ki nahi, india mein boht si languages hain jiski waja se log apne apne lehje mein urdu bolte hain. Urdu ki mother tou lucknow hai, uska kya muqaabla. And urdu ko woi sab se acha pronounce kr skte hain, ya punjabi log acha bol skte hain urdu
Hahaha. Bht aala. Im a Pakistani but i liked your answer. Cant stop laughing
I think she is asking about beher or meter of the ghazal
"Aur aap Pakistani insaniyat ki maa bahen kar dete hai.."
I was talking about this one :p
Language kaisi bhi ho Samjh to Aa rahi hai baat-baat main Indian Pakistani ki insult kyu ji .galiya to sabhi nikalte hai lekin koi samjhta nahi ki galti kyu hui hai
Taskeen sahab. Sab se ghatya karachi ma boli jati hai. Muhajer aap logon ne MQM ko berhawa diya howa hai. Warna koi chaker nai. Sare pakistan ma urdu parahi aur likhai jati hai. Population ke lehaz se punjab phir bara hai.
Aur sind ma 2 city hai. Karachi aur haiderabad. Punjab ma lahore. Faisalabad. Multan. Sailkot. Gujraat. Rawalpindi.
Jo khandani raees hain wo mizaaj rakhty hai narm apna,
tumhara lehja bata raha hai , tumhari doulat nayi nayi hai.
For all those who are fighting.
WO Jo sadiyo purana mulk he...itna bantkr b kitna chup he...
Diye krodo unhe basar ko, gispethi Ki lat nhi gyi he...
Pka pkaya Mila h fal pr...khana na Jane to kese khaye
Taj o takht ki smj kha h...mili hukmt nyi nyi he...
Kya baat kadhi hai Devendra....
Bye the way stop fighting... Ye behetareen ghazal kharab mat kariye. With all due respect to both India 🇮🇳and pakistan 🇵🇰. Love you all
Best reply ever 👍👍👍.
Love ❤️ you both 🇮🇳and 🇵🇰
Abu Mind your language, that is what your parents teach you? that is what your religion teach you?
Apne baap se bhi aise hi bat krte ho?
Pakistani or hindustani please tell us name of poet/ shahara
It was Mir Amman (1750-1837) who first presumed Urdu was born that way. In his preface to ‘Bagh-o-Bahar’ (1802), he wrote that Mughal emperor Shah Jahan (who reigned between 1628 and 1658) made Delhi his capital and named its bazaar ‘Urdu-e-moalla’.
Anonymous seems to be a wonderful human being.. A beautiful soul
Nice words form poets
And dont fight on pak and india
Plz make clear study on the topic and than start fighting
Ahel-e- alim ki nishani hai woh khamosh rahty hain
Itna lad liye sab, kisi ko ye nahi soojha ki Shabeena Adeeb kahan ki hain?
Hi everyone my name is Ahsan and I'm from Pakistan,I've read all the comments from top to bottom about the poet and the poetry but I'm very much sad about the comments which were given by both the countries.Like your country is this and that,as a Pakistani we're very much patriot about our country so does the Indians.So one thing I must say for both the youths that leave that Indian and Pakistani fight it has created a lot of difference amoung both the countries.The blood of Pakistan is also red like the Indians remember that thanks and I apologize to the people if I've said any harsh or hard word.
Qazi Miyan kiski ghazal farma rahe hain aap ye?
Kyu lad rh ho bhai bhashao ko leke....hamare yha to hindi or urdu dono ko sagi bahan mana jata hai....kumar viswas ji ne bhi likha tha ki
Ye urdu bazm hai or me to hindi maa k jaya hu
Jubaane mulk ki bahne hai ye pegam laya hu
Mujhe dugni mohabbat se suno urdu juban walo
Me apni maa ka beta hu me ghar mosi ke aaya hu....
Zanaab Hasnat Tariq Usuf sahab,
Aapka Urdu ke prati prem/lagaaw beshaq Qabil-E-Tareef hai lekin huzoor Urdu kee shaan mein ghustakhiyaan to aap se bhee huee hain. Adab aur adeebon kee is zubaan ko pyaar hum naacheez bhee utna hee karte hain jitna ki aap lekin hum is maamle mein pyaar tak hee rah gaye aap ke maanind ghuroor kee had tak naa jaa sake iska malaal hamein zaraa bhi nahin hai kyonki humein hamaree khaalaa "Urdu" ne narmee aur adab hee sikhaayaa hai.
"Khamosh lab hain jhuki hain palke (palken),
dilo (dilon) me ulfat nayi nayi hai.
Abhi taklluf (taqalluf) hai guftgu (ghuftaghoo) me (mein),
abhi mohobat nayi nayi hai.
Abhi na aayegi neend tumko
abhi na hamko sakoon milega,
abhi to dharkay (dhadke) ka (ga) dil zyada
abhi ye chahat nayi nayi hai."
Ghustakhee maaf.
Aapka apna:
Sumit Kumar Singh
Guys kyu ladh rahe ho..gazal padho feel karo enjoy karo...
Urdu hindi ye galat wo sahi hai aap galat sahi hai bol bol kar sari Gazal ka maza khrab kar diya aap sab hadh hoti hai haiisko kwhtay hai
be-his-o-harakat बेहिस-ओ-हरकत بے_حس_و_حرکت
This is not your original writing. Please dit take the credit for it
Shayara ka naam
Mohataraema Shabeena Adeeb
Oh guys whats going on? by the way i want to share some ghalaz's to here like it?
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